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Remove me
from my un-uniqueness
let the crimson and gold
overtake my identity
It's good for me
to lose my baseness
FALL from the arms
that once held me so
dear; needed

As though my
usefulness has
become pest

It's okay once
in a while to
lose myself
maybe I will grow
into a new
and get rid of My peers
as I have myself been

As I drift slowly I find my
cord cut, and I am now one
I may have been admired
but
only
for
a little
while
:iconeatlimegreen:
Poem about fall, from a leaf's perspective...
For a contest on :iconuniqueteenwriters:
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~starxchan Nov 24, 2010   General Artist
You received Second Place in the #uniqueTeenwriters's Fall Contest

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:iconeatlimegreen:
Thank You so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bounce:
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~starxchan Nov 24, 2010   General Artist
no prob. i loved your story. :)
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:iconeatlimegreen:
I cannot wait for the Winter contest!
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~starxchan Nov 24, 2010   General Artist
...i need an idea first. my brother has told me to stop being such a predicable fool.

he used those words.

he's 12.


>_<

so i am trying to think of something interesting.
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:iconeatlimegreen:
Take your time, I'm sure it will be good!
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~starxchan Nov 24, 2010   General Artist
done. go check it out.
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:icondream-in-digital:
funny that sometimes a leaf perspective how you wrote can describe someones feelings as well. i enjoyed this:)
good job
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:iconlost-android:
Ahhh. ;u; What an interesting point of view. Very fitting for the season. :]
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